Iris & I went to visit Mom, a.k.a. Gramma.
This is the first flower I saw in her yard.
Then I looked up and—
Lo!—
a carpet of spring flowers surrounded me.

Assignment: centered composition
Iris & I went to visit Mom, a.k.a. Gramma.
This is the first flower I saw in her yard.
Then I looked up and—
Lo!—
a carpet of spring flowers surrounded me.

Assignment: centered composition